Wednesday 4 May 2016

Mr and Little Miss Writing

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  1. Hi Marnie, I like the way you used lots of descriptive language. You might want to try putting in one of Mr Spoty's games.

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  2. Hi Marnie, I like the name Mr Sporty. Is Mr Sporty Faster then the fastest person in the world?

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