Wednesday 5 April 2017

Forces of nature

2 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Marnie S I love your poem about fire. It made me think of the poem I did.Why did you decide to make the poem about fire? If you would like to see my learning my blog is http://kanierekaylad.blogspot.co.nz/

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  2. Hi Marnie it is Thomas Kaniere School. I like your poem about fire.I also like the first sentience about the trees turning in to Cole because of the flames.

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