I am a learner at Westland High School in Hokitika, NZ
Hi Marnie, I like the way you used lots of descriptive language. You might want to try putting in one of Mr Spoty's games.
Hi Marnie, I like the name Mr Sporty. Is Mr Sporty Faster then the fastest person in the world?
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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.
Hi Marnie, I like the way you used lots of descriptive language. You might want to try putting in one of Mr Spoty's games.
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