I am a learner at Westland High School in Hokitika, NZ
hello Marnie, Jessie here I love your story about Labradors ,maybe next time you could include the things that are in the closing you could put them in the story pages. but awesome job!
Hi Marnie, its Maddie, I love your story about labradors. I like how you added in lots of facts about them and described them. Miss you Maddison
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hello Marnie, Jessie here I love your story about Labradors ,maybe next time you could include the things that are in the closing you could put them in the story pages. but awesome job!
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